I have changed the look of my work- after getting ripped by geoff!! it was necessary though as I have reviewed my work, this image is a business card and swing tag! comments appreciated, I will also put more images on my blog. comments appreciated
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This is much better than what you had before hun, think you should come up with a couple of proposals for your client to chose from
Michelle
Yeah I definetly agree with Michelle, some variations of the swing tag would be great to see next to this one! I really like the image of the legs, its a cool idea, the only thing I'd say is perhaps make the bum look a bit more 'juicy' & round and bit less abstract, unless thats what you were going with... Look 4ward to seeing more! Mary
thanxs ladies yea got some more just need to finish them then will put up!meeting my client next week planning to have at least three or four for her to choose from.
Just to critique, your email address and phone number shouldn't run into one another at the bottom, although this is a mock up so I'm not sure if you're actually using that info in the real one. Also, is there a font that you could use that is slightly less identifiable? Most people have that font on their computers. something more inacessible/less recognisable to the public would make it feel more bespoke to the client.
Like the colour theme thus far though.
Ok thats very useful joanne cool, I was going to change the colour actually and just have an acccent colour will put up today. I chose the type because i wanted something quite elegant but I do agree i think it would be better to have something less recognisable!
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